A Little one's Anthem
Father, oh father, you know you're better,
In all the things we do, you do it better.
You're magical, really truly magical,
Even when the world gets so radical;
You're always there sounding sensible.
Between you and me I say you're so lovable.
And so I love you so, with my of my heart,
The family too they do, with all their heart.
Reader Comments (4)
I'm thrilled that your creativity has yet another venue; another audience to inspire.
I acknowledge you for being generous with your time and skill. Write, write, write!! And bring the rest along for the word-ride.
It has been sometime since I and the 'numbered guy' wrote or posted pieces in the same forum. I still remember the days (and nights) when even you contributed to the creation of beautiful poetry. I hope those days when we all enjoyed poetry and when poetry had motivated us comes back and encourages many other friends to join us in ensuring the success of 'fathering rhymes'.
Thanks for the acknowledgement, paradise, your contribution and willingness to give something back to the community are efforts worth acknowledging too. That is not to mention the work you are doing to celebrate fatherhood. It makes me proud to be one of that gender :)
It's great to hear from you. Stay in touch. :-)