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A Little one's Anthem

Father, oh father, you know you're better,

In all the things we do, you do it better.

You're magical, really truly magical,

Even when the world gets so radical;

You're always there sounding sensible.

Between you and me I say you're so lovable.

And so I love you so, with my of my heart,

The family too they do, with all their heart.

Posted on Wed, October 18, 2006 at 04:44PM by Registered Commentertherhymer | Comments4 Comments

Reader Comments (4)

It's great to have you on board!! I first considered poetry as something I could play with after having read you and that other 'numbered' guy. :)

I'm thrilled that your creativity has yet another venue; another audience to inspire.

I acknowledge you for being generous with your time and skill. Write, write, write!! And bring the rest along for the word-ride.
October 18, 2006 | Registered Commenterparadise
Hey paradise, thanks.

It has been sometime since I and the 'numbered guy' wrote or posted pieces in the same forum. I still remember the days (and nights) when even you contributed to the creation of beautiful poetry. I hope those days when we all enjoyed poetry and when poetry had motivated us comes back and encourages many other friends to join us in ensuring the success of 'fathering rhymes'.

Thanks for the acknowledgement, paradise, your contribution and willingness to give something back to the community are efforts worth acknowledging too. That is not to mention the work you are doing to celebrate fatherhood. It makes me proud to be one of that gender :)
October 20, 2006 | Registered Commentertherhymer
hi firdos sorry it is a bit late to reply but i found some time to appreciate what you done on the home page we will meet some time soon because my school wants me to go back
Hey, what are you doing hiding in here?

It's great to hear from you. Stay in touch. :-)
April 1, 2007 | Registered Commenterparadise

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